Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 14, 2018
My poetry
this is my poetry book I did in 2017. It was my favourite thing we did in writing. They are all about my favourite things and people, especially family. it is completely finished.
That was my poetry book. I hope you liked it. What was your favourite piece of poetry? And please tell me if I did something wrong
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Hola Piper!
ReplyDeleteI really like your post! I think its awesome and funny. It reminds me when I did one of these last year. Do you also find it funny? Maybe something you could do next time is check the spelling or grammar? But anyway I really love your post (especially the part about me XD)
Adios! Cybella
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Hey Cybella!
Deletethank you for commenting, I will try to check on my spelling and grammar next time.
thank you so much :D
Hi piper!
ReplyDeletethis is a really good post!
please look at my blog!
Kia ora Piper!, my name is Angel and I am from Parkview Parua School
ReplyDeleteI love this poetry book!, especially all the gifs in it, maybe next time you could add some more different animals on it!, it reminds me of when I made my poetry book in 2017!. Great job! -Angel (Insult) >:3