Blending in

for free writing I have been working on a story called blending in. It is about a zebra that has been cast out of her herd. I hope you like the story. I apologies for my mistakes.

Blending In 
Karina Just kept looking at the ground Her muddy hooves trampling the grass. It has Been Six days since she’s been cast out of her herd. Karina Raised her head, everyone else was busy grazing. How long would her presence be secret? Not long Until they notice. Karina Started to fell A bit jumpy and nervous. she dances on the spot, jumping at every sudden movement or noise, then the horses start to raise their heads and looks directly at Karina! Karina’s stripes Stood out against the white and pale grey horses all around her. There was nowhere to hide. So she ran. Bumping into everyone around her. she ran as fast as her little legs could go! Karina ran, she knew She’ll never fit in. so she must make this journey alone. It had been a week since I was cast out of my herd. I’ve had nothing but trouble, I’m starving and weak unable to walk properly I stumble over to a small patch of dying grass. I start to sniff at the grass then take a small bite. The zebra stripes on my body were dull and dusty, while my eyes were hollow and hungry. My belly growled for more food, I took another bite and started to chew. The dry grass felt tasteless in my mouth, I swallow then carry on my journey to find a new home. I knew I’d never find a home among the horses. I was a fool to think I would be able to stay there, I’ll never fit in, I was born to be an outcast, I thought. My Legs were sore and covered in bruises, I was tired and hungry, My head was ducked low and my hooves dragged on the ground with every step. I Was to tired I thought I would collapse in any moment. I fall to the ground dust rising all around my body as it thumped onto the dry and dehydrated surface. I give a little sneeze then lower my head to the ground and pant there. My ribs were sticking out of the side of my body, so clear you could count them. I stagger up, my rest over and continue to find a herd that will let me stay, At Least for awhile, Until I recover.

I hope you enjoyed, tell me what you think. Feel free to point out any mistakes.