On Friday one of our activities was to write a small description of our chosen scenery. I chose this rock beach looking thing with mountains and clouds, stuff like that :/
Bright blue waves crashing up against the rocks. The easy breeze pushing the salty smell of ocean water into the air. Clouds and mountains gathered along the horizon, the smell of mold drifted across the shore, old rocks from long ago rotting. It was cold, foam spit and bubbled as small gushes of water got closer and closer. The clouds in the distance were now just above head, covering the sun dimming the light
It isn't very long but It holds quite a bit of description, in my opinion anyway. I don't really think I did to good.
I didn't really enjoy writing this it was kinda boring but I liked the tiny pictures :3
did you like the tiny pictures? I think they are pretty cool! please feel free to give me feedback about what I could do better (please)
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