WALT: Write as many words as you can in 10 minutes
today we did the 10 minute challenge. It was easy, but hard. In the ten minute challenge you have to write a story, that makes sense, in 10 minutes.
Me and my brother walked down to the shop to get some chocolate. The man behind the counter was restocking candy smokers. I have $20 and my brother had $20 too. As I walked down the aisle I saw the chocolates. I immediately ran up to the chocolate, it towered above me. I saw 1 of the M&M chocolates left. I knew my brother wanted it to I took it first.
“YOU KNEW I WANTED THAT” He threw his hands onto his hips.
“No I didn’t” I rolled my eyes sarcastically
Then I got up to the counter and brought it. Then I looked around and I saw Some chocolate milk and candy floss.
“Yum i’ll gets those too” I whispered.
So I brought them and I walked out of the store with my brother.
This it my story I hope you liked it. I think I did a good job, But I really want to know what you think. What was your favourite part of my story?
Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, August 29, 2018
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
5 Sentence Challenge
WALT: write exactly 5 sentences
today we did a 5 sentence challenge. it was really easy I did it in 5 minutes. Much easier than the 100 words challenge.
One day Me and my metal bat went to the garden center. I was looking everywhere at all the beautiful flowers. I saw a particular rose bush that made my ugly heart sting, because a rose thorn poked me in the chest, so hard. Then I beat the rose bush because i’m mad. That's just what people do when the burning with crazy, unstoppable, mental hatred.
so that's my 5 sentence. This is based off a true story, in my back garden. so I think I did a good job doing only 5 sentences. I almost did 6. Do you think I did good? Whats your favourite sentence?
today we did a 5 sentence challenge. it was really easy I did it in 5 minutes. Much easier than the 100 words challenge.
One day Me and my metal bat went to the garden center. I was looking everywhere at all the beautiful flowers. I saw a particular rose bush that made my ugly heart sting, because a rose thorn poked me in the chest, so hard. Then I beat the rose bush because i’m mad. That's just what people do when the burning with crazy, unstoppable, mental hatred.
so that's my 5 sentence. This is based off a true story, in my back garden. so I think I did a good job doing only 5 sentences. I almost did 6. Do you think I did good? Whats your favourite sentence?
Monday, August 27, 2018
Mystical and Magical Quick,Quality Blog Posts.
WALT: we are learning to do quick quality blog posts.
This is how to a quick quality blog posts. I did a animation on how to do a quick quality blog post. It took a long time, at the end the teacher was just surprised. so don't think its weird. If you want to know where I got the info go to the Link.
I thought it was hard because I didn't know what to do. then my mind landed on ANIMATION.It was really fun and the kids have really weird hair styles. I got my post done and I got to show my creativity.
What do you think of the animation? what did my Information show you? 🦄
This is how to a quick quality blog posts. I did a animation on how to do a quick quality blog post. It took a long time, at the end the teacher was just surprised. so don't think its weird. If you want to know where I got the info go to the Link.
I thought it was hard because I didn't know what to do. then my mind landed on ANIMATION.It was really fun and the kids have really weird hair styles. I got my post done and I got to show my creativity.
What do you think of the animation? what did my Information show you? 🦄
Friday, August 24, 2018
Calendar Art
We have been doing animal eyes for our calendar art. we could've done a digital one But I chose Animal eyes. my animal eye is a horse one. its not the best but its OK.
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this is my horse eye. I know it kinda looks like a cow or snow leopard. what do you think it looks like? It was pretty hard. BTW the patch up the top right is the ear.🐎🐴 |
Thursday, August 23, 2018
100 Word Writing Challenge
WALT: write a 100 word story.
Today we were given a challenge to write a 100 word story with this prompt: ...As I read the contents of the letter, I am aware of the smile on my face... It was kinda hard, but I wrote exactly 100 words.
I hurried outside to the mailbox, excitement burning inside of me. I opened the mailbox and pulled out a letter. I opened the letter, as I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face fading. I can’t believe he replaced me with a new family. I showed mum the letter, she burst into tears that was soon replaced by rage. My mum crunched up the letter in her fist and threw it in the fireplace and watched it burn. I ran to my pillow and cried. I lashed out at my unicorn pillow.
It was really hard to write close to 100 words because 100 words is not a lot. It was very fun though, The hardest part was probably trying to end the story on 100 words. If you try this prepare to be challenged. :D
I hurried outside to the mailbox, excitement burning inside of me. I opened the mailbox and pulled out a letter. I opened the letter, as I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face fading. I can’t believe he replaced me with a new family. I showed mum the letter, she burst into tears that was soon replaced by rage. My mum crunched up the letter in her fist and threw it in the fireplace and watched it burn. I ran to my pillow and cried. I lashed out at my unicorn pillow.
It was really hard to write close to 100 words because 100 words is not a lot. It was very fun though, The hardest part was probably trying to end the story on 100 words. If you try this prepare to be challenged. :D
Thursday, August 2, 2018
Outer Space Before and After Chart
WALT: complete a before and after chart to activate our prior knowledge on space.
Me and my group have read a book on outer space. before we read the book we fill the inner spaces with our prior knowledge. them after we read the book we fill the outer spaces with new knowledge.
Me and my group have read a book on outer space. before we read the book we fill the inner spaces with our prior knowledge. them after we read the book we fill the outer spaces with new knowledge.
It was very hard filling in all the outer spaces. I couldn't get enough information to fill in all the gaps. next time I will divide the book into pages and try to find as much information as I can, so I can complete the before and after chart. |
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