WALT: Write as many words as you can in 10 minutes
today we did the 10 minute challenge. It was easy, but hard. In the ten minute challenge you have to write a story, that makes sense, in 10 minutes.
Me and my brother walked down to the shop to get some chocolate. The man behind the counter was restocking candy smokers. I have $20 and my brother had $20 too. As I walked down the aisle I saw the chocolates. I immediately ran up to the chocolate, it towered above me. I saw 1 of the M&M chocolates left. I knew my brother wanted it to I took it first.
“YOU KNEW I WANTED THAT” He threw his hands onto his hips.
“No I didn’t” I rolled my eyes sarcastically
Then I got up to the counter and brought it. Then I looked around and I saw Some chocolate milk and candy floss.
“Yum i’ll gets those too” I whispered.
So I brought them and I walked out of the store with my brother.
This it my story I hope you liked it. I think I did a good job, But I really want to know what you think. What was your favourite part of my story?
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