Kia ora, I am a student at Mairehau High School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Today I just felt like posting a picture I drew at home of my warrior cat OC MoonFeather. I made her up myself and I'm writing a story all about her. I will post that story when I am done.
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It Isn't that good. its looks better In real life. but it is ok. this is my drawing I hope you liked it.
Hi Piper, I love your drawing and art style, I can't wait till you finish your story and publish it! But maybe next time you post a picture of your drawing, try flattening the picture so there are no ripples/bumps. Is the story of MoonFeather a sort of bio? Apart from that, your drawing if magnificent! Keep up the great work! -Your great friend, Aysha
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Hi Piper,
ReplyDeleteI love your drawing and art style, I can't wait till you finish your story and publish it!
But maybe next time you post a picture of your drawing, try flattening the picture so there are no ripples/bumps.
Is the story of MoonFeather a sort of bio?
Apart from that, your drawing if magnificent! Keep up the great work!
-Your great friend, Aysha