Cats are better than dogs.

WALT: we are doing a fee choice persuasive writing.
we are doing some persuasive writing, we can choose any subject and i chose cats are better than dogs.

I  very, very strongly believe that cats are so much better than dogs, because:

Cats are smaller so you can cuddle them easily, also you don’t have to walk them and you

don’t have to pick up their poop.

Firstly, cats are smaller, so easier to cuddle, cats are also soft and fluffy and they aren't heavy

at all.

That makes them easier to put then on your lap and you don’t have to sleep in a awkward

angle because they are so small.

Secondly, you don’t have to walk them. Dogs need to walk and cats don’t which is better because

then you don’t have to waste your time walking for an hour around the park or the sidewalks,

cats just venture out and get exercise without you.

Thirdly, cats sleep a lot so you don’t have to worry about leaving them home alone.

They entertain themselves and they are mostly tired, they also explore a lot and jump fences and other stuff.

Also they love the silence, it helps them calm down and mellow out.

Lastly, cats are way better than dogs because they don’t go crazy when they see another cat

like dogs do, also they don’t see a dog and try to kill them like what dogs do to cats.

Those were all the reasons why i think cats are way better than dogs.

So get a cat now, even if you are allergic to them. Or if you are a dog person.

-Piper

that was my writing, tell me what you think of my writing, and what's your opinion. do you think cats are better than dogs?

A Warrior cat picture

Today I just felt like posting a picture I drew at home of my warrior cat OC MoonFeather. I made her up myself and I'm writing a story all about her. I will post that story when I am done.

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It Isn't that good. its looks better In real life. but it is ok. this is my drawing I hope you liked it.

Blending in

for free writing I have been working on a story called blending in. It is about a zebra that has been cast out of her herd. I hope you like the story. I apologies for my mistakes.

Blending In 
Karina Just kept looking at the ground Her muddy hooves trampling the grass. It has Been Six days since she’s been cast out of her herd. Karina Raised her head, everyone else was busy grazing. How long would her presence be secret? Not long Until they notice. Karina Started to fell A bit jumpy and nervous. she dances on the spot, jumping at every sudden movement or noise, then the horses start to raise their heads and looks directly at Karina! Karina’s stripes Stood out against the white and pale grey horses all around her. There was nowhere to hide. So she ran. Bumping into everyone around her. she ran as fast as her little legs could go! Karina ran, she knew She’ll never fit in. so she must make this journey alone. It had been a week since I was cast out of my herd. I’ve had nothing but trouble, I’m starving and weak unable to walk properly I stumble over to a small patch of dying grass. I start to sniff at the grass then take a small bite. The zebra stripes on my body were dull and dusty, while my eyes were hollow and hungry. My belly growled for more food, I took another bite and started to chew. The dry grass felt tasteless in my mouth, I swallow then carry on my journey to find a new home. I knew I’d never find a home among the horses. I was a fool to think I would be able to stay there, I’ll never fit in, I was born to be an outcast, I thought. My Legs were sore and covered in bruises, I was tired and hungry, My head was ducked low and my hooves dragged on the ground with every step. I Was to tired I thought I would collapse in any moment. I fall to the ground dust rising all around my body as it thumped onto the dry and dehydrated surface. I give a little sneeze then lower my head to the ground and pant there. My ribs were sticking out of the side of my body, so clear you could count them. I stagger up, my rest over and continue to find a herd that will let me stay, At Least for awhile, Until I recover.

I hope you enjoyed, tell me what you think. Feel free to point out any mistakes.

My Stop Motion Animation

WALT: Using stop motion animator create a animation and put is on your blog
This week for Cybersmart we did stop motion animation. Mine is about blobs eating things. There are also mermaids and blob people a snake, mouse and me in the corner.
here it is!


That was my stop motion animation, tell me about your favourite part,if you have any questions tell me!!!

My ten Minute Challenge or a new story?

WALT: You have ten minutes to write as much as you can.
This is my ten minute challenge and a new story idea. It is based of a book series called warrior cats. It is about my OC and her family. Hope you enjoy.

“We’ve been walking for moons! When will we stop?”

“Quiet ShadowKit we are nearly there”

“Mum I’m hungry can you or SilverPelt go and hunt please?”

“No we must keep walking, I can smell wind clan scent.”

The mumbles got closer and the bushes shook intensely and about 4 cats emerged from the bush with three kits trailing behind.

“There is cat scent here,” a grey she-cat meowed.

“And it’s still fresh,” a silver tom replied.

“Who cares can we just go on now,” a small black kit replied being carried by a ginger she-cat.

“We should rest MoonPool, the kits need food” the she cat insisted

“Yes MoonPool please” a light grey she-kit bounced around

“OK.” The grey she-cat sighed.

I crept up to the end of the branch. And leaped from the branch onto the silver

toms back. When I caught a glance at the gray she-cat, I saw she had scars and scratches all over her.

“An attack!” The gray she-cat screeched

“Firepelt and MudTail get the kits and hide!” The silver tom demanded to the brown tom and ginger she-cat.

That was my ten minute challenge hope you enjoyed it. soon there will be a full story and I will post it.

Tell me what you think about it. and please point out any mistakes.

'Frogs' Graphic Text Vs School Journal

W.A.L.T: we are comparing Graphic text and school journals together and which one we like best.

Graphic text

journal Book

our group was reading a book about frogs. there was a kid who found frogs. and apparently they are extinct. he found some and then these people found  him. that's all we know. So my favourite one is the journal book, because there are more words and less pictures. personally I like no pictures and all words. I've always liked to imagine it myself.

I hope you liked my opinion. tell me what one you like best!

Clouds

My animation on a bad cloud relationship, I hope you enjoy!!


 Hope you liked it, leave a comment about your favourite part!

My poetry

W.A.L.T: Write different types of poetry

this is my poetry book I did in 2017. It was my favourite thing we did in writing. They are all about my favourite things and people, especially family. it is completely finished.

That was my poetry book. I hope you liked it. What was your favourite piece of poetry? And please tell me if I did something wrong

My Free Writing

W.A.L.T: be creative.
This is part 1 on this weird story thing. I hope you like it. at the end I was kinda running out of ideas. so I just IMAGINED.
here is my story

THE MEME OF TO DAY IS: Lelele

Once I walked down to the beach and there was a dead angel on the ground. She had strait brown hair, and the parkview school uniform on. IT WAS ANGEL CARSNER. She had died of saltiness from the ocean. Wait. no she didn’t she died of pot plants. She saw a descriptive trail or soil next to her body, then Angel Looked up as said “ he went to Jimmelele’s house” then she was dead again. Lelelelele ( my name) went to Jimmelele’s house and walked up behind Jimmelele. “Angel is dead Jimmelele” Lelelelele whispered. Lelelelelelelelelelelelelelelele lelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelel lelelelelel lele lele lelelele lelelel lelel lelelele lelelele lelelelelelelelelelelele lelelelelelelelele, AND DONE. So angel flew up the stairs and killed the pot plant but more came then a cookie ate a cookie then another then another then another then another until all cookies where lelele. More lelele lelele lelele “lelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelele” Murmured Lelelelele

“Lelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelelele” Yelled Jimmelele

OMG I LOVES LELELELELELELELELELE!!!!!

BANANA float down from space and a deer got drunk and rode a unicorn that was sleeping at a elephant rave. Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo is this a good story or do we need to take it back to why I hate warriors?

If you wanna read more wait for pt 2: why I hate Warriors,It’s a love hate relationship.

that was my story I it very... weird. don't ask why. What was your favourite part? if you had one.

10 Minute Challenge

WALT: Write as many words as you can in 10 minutes
today we did the 10 minute challenge. It was easy, but hard. In the ten minute challenge you have to write a story, that makes sense, in 10 minutes.



Me and my brother walked down to the shop to get some chocolate. The man behind the counter was restocking candy smokers. I have $20 and my brother had $20 too. As I walked down the aisle I saw the chocolates. I immediately ran up to the chocolate, it towered above me. I saw 1 of the M&M chocolates left. I knew my brother wanted it to I took it first. “YOU KNEW I WANTED THAT” He threw his hands onto his hips. “No I didn’t” I rolled my eyes sarcastically Then I got up to the counter and brought it. Then I looked around and I saw Some chocolate milk and candy floss. “Yum i’ll gets those too” I whispered. So I brought them and I walked out of the store with my brother.

This it my story I hope you liked it. I think I did a good job, But I really want to know what you think. What was your favourite part of my story?

5 Sentence Challenge

WALT: write exactly  5 sentences
today we did a 5 sentence challenge. it was really easy I did it in 5 minutes. Much easier than the 100 words challenge.

One day Me and my metal bat went to the garden center. I was looking everywhere at all the beautiful flowers. I saw a particular rose bush that made my ugly heart sting, because a rose thorn poked me in the chest, so hard. Then I beat the rose bush because i’m mad. That's just what people do when the burning with crazy, unstoppable, mental hatred.

so that's my 5 sentence. This is based off a true story, in my back garden. so I think I did a good job doing only 5 sentences. I almost did 6. Do you think I did good? Whats your favourite sentence?

Mystical and Magical Quick,Quality Blog Posts.

WALT: we are learning to do quick quality blog posts.
This is how to a quick quality blog posts. I did a animation on how to do a quick quality blog post. It took a long time, at the end the teacher was just surprised. so don't think its weird. If you want to know where I got the info go to the Link.


 I thought it was hard because I didn't know what to do. then my mind landed on ANIMATION.It was really fun and the kids have really weird hair styles. I got my post done and I got to show my creativity.
What do you think of the animation? what did my Information show you? 🦄

Calendar Art

We have been doing animal eyes for our calendar art. we could've done a digital one But I chose Animal eyes. my animal eye is a horse one. its not the best but its OK.

this is my horse eye. I know it kinda looks like a cow or snow leopard. what do you think it looks like? It was pretty hard. BTW the patch up the top right is the ear.🐎🐴

100 Word Writing Challenge

WALT: write a 100 word story. Today we were given a challenge to write a 100 word story with this prompt: ...As I read the contents of the letter, I am aware of the smile on my face... It was kinda hard, but I wrote exactly 100 words.     

I hurried outside to the mailbox, excitement burning inside of me. I opened the mailbox and pulled out a letter. I opened the letter, as I read the contents of the letter, I was aware of the smile on my face fading. I can’t believe he replaced me with a new family. I showed mum the letter, she burst into tears that was soon replaced by rage. My mum crunched up the letter in her fist and threw it in the fireplace and watched it burn. I ran to my pillow and cried. I lashed out at my unicorn pillow.

 It was really hard to write close to 100 words because 100 words is not a lot. It was very fun though, The hardest part was probably trying to end the story on 100 words. If you try this prepare to be challenged. :D                    

Outer Space Before and After Chart

WALT:  complete a before and after chart to activate our prior knowledge on space.

Me and my group have read a book on outer space. before we read the book we fill the inner spaces with our prior knowledge. them after we read the book we fill the outer spaces with new knowledge.

It was very hard filling in all the outer spaces. I couldn't get enough information to fill in all the gaps.
next time I will divide the book into pages and try to find as much information as I can, so I can complete the before and after chart. 

world war facts

look and read at my war facts. you might learn something new!!🔫

what a blog profile should/shouldn't have

this is mind Mup. read and figure out what you should/shouldn't have on your blog profile

What to Include in a Blog Profile

How would you decide if something should be kept private? we are learning to not put private info on the internet.

will you choose private or public

welcome, watch closely to this video about if you keep your info private or public. 👍

unicorn life

Hello and welcome to my animation, it is about a unicorn. I hope you enjoy. its not done yet :D

purpose of a blog post

we are learning what the purpose of our learning blogs are. check out why we create out blogs posts 🦄

Welcome

Welcome to my very own blog for learning. I look forward to sharing my learning with teachers, my school, my family and friends anywhere.